State of Creative Criticality – November 2023

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State of Creative Criticality
November 2023
November 15, 2023

Where have I been?

It’s a great question, and the answer is pretty simple. My day job has taken up the vast majority of my bandwidth over the last few months with a massive high-visibility project on a tight deadline. Imagine taking a process that should take several years and safely fast-tracking it in far less time while still maintaining the expected quality and making a profit for my employers.

Something had to give. That something was my work here. But as the day gig’s needs start to loosen a bit, I can spare a few more spoons (or spell slots, if you will) at Creative Criticality.

I appreciate your support and your patience as I continue to explore pop culture and the world around us both critically and creatively.

So, where do we go from here?

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I placed the Timestamps Project on hiatus during the writers’ and actors’ strikes, but I’m ready to pick up again with Arachnids in the UK, more than likely around the Doctor Who 60th anniversary. There are 26 entries remaining in the Thirteenth Doctor’s era, and by the time this website catches up to the actual show, it will be closer to 30 entries.

After that, the Timestamps Project will become a bit more – ahem – timely as I cover each season/series as it finishes. I still want to keep the slight delay in place to keep the spirit of the project, though.

In the meantime, I’m considering some options for rewatches of other series. I keep toying with the idea of covering Star Trek like this, but I also need a bit of a break from 60-year-old franchises. I’m thinking smaller and something with fewer seasons.

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This semi-regular look at topics that I “just can’t let go of” will continue as well. I’m always on the lookout for good topics to muse about, as well as promoting the good things my friends do in the creative space. This topic ends up being a kind of catch-all for whatever pop culture or real-world topic is on my mind.

Among those topics is Narrative Diversons, the quarterly discussion on what I’ve been watching, reading, and playing. Expect the end-of-the-year edition to include from Autumn 2023 as well as those movies and television items from Summer 2023 that I didn’t discuss due to the strikes.

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This series takes a lot of time to research and prepare, which is why it often falls to the back burner, but it is also important to me because of my history, education, and experience. It’s not going away anytime soon.

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Similarly, this series will continue. It’s another time-consuming one to write, but I love to cook for those I care about. With my schedule running the way it has been this year, my meals have been reduced to a repeating regimen of easy-to-remember and easy-to-cook items. All still healthy, but lacking in experimentation.

Other Items

Before my schedule flew out the window and exploded, I submitted short works to two publications. Those will be coming soon from their respective houses.

2023 Pubs

I contributed a short humorous essay for the tenth-anniversary edition of Outside In, a series published by ATB Publishing. Celebrating 10 years of the book series and 60 years of Doctor Who, this book looks at 163 adventures from the classic era as a celebration of both the television show and the book series inspired by it. It is available for pre-order with a release date of November 23, 2023. You can find the pre-order and more information at ATB Publishing.

I also contributed to Dragon Tales, the charity anthology edited by Michael Gordon. Dragon Tales is a benefit book celebrating Atlanta’s largest multi-media pop culture convention for fans by fans. It contains stories, essays, memories, pro-tips, and more by folks who honor Dragon Con in their heart and try to keep it all the year. I previously mentioned this in September, and a release date is still forthcoming.

Last, but certainly not least, I also have a project that’s been simmering for years and was inspired by friends Bethany Kesler and Gary Mitchel at Wholanta 2018. It’s been a while, obviously, but I really want to pick that up again.


Anyway, I’m not dead (yet) and neither is Creative Criticality. If there was a way to pay the bills by simply keeping the lights on here and talking culture all day, I’d do it, but sometimes the day gig calls and I have to answer.

Thanks again for sticking around. I look forward to picking up the torch once again very soon.


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Culture on My Mind – The Quest for Sunshine Preservation (Autumn 2023 Edition)

Culture on My Mind

Culture on My Mind
The Quest for Sunshine Preservation
(Autumn 2023 Edition)

November 6, 2023

It’s that time once again.

Daylight saving time is the practice of advancing clocks by one hour in warmer seasons to make darkness fall at a later clock time. It is utilized in several countries around the world and the concept has caused controversy since the earliest proposals. To this day it affects the sleep patterns and productivity of those who practice it.

Many countries and territories abolished the practice after years of practice. The European Union conducted a survey in 2018 and determined that 84 percent of respondents did not want to adjust clocks twice a year. The EU was supposed to stop daylight saving time in 2021 but later asked for a more detailed assessment first.

The United States cannot abolish daylight saving time without federal approval. The practice was established in 1918 with the Standard Time Act and modified in 1966 with the Uniform Time Act (which itself has been revised several times). The government has attempted to abolish routine time changes several times, most recently with the Sunshine Protection Act. The legislation has been introduced multiple times and has died before being passed each time.

For more information (and some humor to brighten your day), check out this 2011 video from CGP Grey.

 


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Culture on My Mind is inspired by the weekly Can’t Let It Go segment on the NPR Politics Podcast where each host brings one thing to the table that they just can’t stop thinking about.

For more creativity with a critical eye, visit Creative Criticality.

Culture on My Mind – Dragon Tales

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Culture on My Mind
Dragon Tales
September 1, 2023

I am honored to be part of a collection of essays, stories, memories, and more about Dragon Con. I will be sure to let you know when this book goes on sale, and all proceeds go to some great causes in memory of some great people.

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Dragon Tales is a benefit book celebrating Atlanta’s largest multi-media pop culture convention for fans by fans. It contains stories, essays, memories, pro-tips, and more by folks who honor Dragon Con in their heart and try to keep it all the year.

Featuring contributions by Jerry Chandler, Joe Crowe, Kevin Eldridge, Michael Falkner, Esther Friesner, Bernadette Johnson, Rob Levy, Bobby Nash, Mary Ogle, James Palmer, Ashley Pauls, Alan Siler, Beth VanDusen, and DJ Spider. Edited by Michael A. Gordon. Cover art by Mary Ogle.

All proceeds of sales will be distributed to two charities in honor of two gentlemen, each of whom loved Dragon Con with all his soul.

Thom Trainor
American Heart Association
https://www.heart.org/

Darren Nowell
Lost-n-Found Youth
https://www.lnfy.org/

Dragon Tales will be available soon on Amazon.com and NewLegendProductions.com. Sadly, there will be no copies on hand for Dragon Con 2023, but please feel free to stop by Comic and Pop Artist Alley Table 624 for more details and promo bookmarks and stickers!


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Culture on My Mind is inspired by the weekly Can’t Let It Go segment on the NPR Politics Podcast where each host brings one thing to the table that they just can’t stop thinking about.

For more creativity with a critical eye, visit Creative Criticality.

Dragon Con 2023: Theater and Performing Arts Lovers Schedule

Dragon Con 2023: Theater and Performing Arts Lovers Schedule
Atlanta, GA – September 1 through September 5, 2022

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As you may have noticed, I am a huge supporter of the Dragon Con Theater and Musical Lovers fan community. They were established as an unofficial gathering of Dragon Con attendees who love theater, musicals, and the performing arts. Their goal is to create a community of fellow thespians and fans at the convention.

They have been running discussion panels on their YouTube channel, and they continue the discussion on their Facebook group and Instagram account.

This year, they have coordinated with various tracks across Dragon Con to present discussion panels and meetups for the community. If you get the chance and want to celebrate the vast riches of the performing arts, I recommend visiting with them.

As always, Dragon Con schedules are tentative until the convention ends on Monday. Even then, things are a bit suspect. Be sure to check the Dragon Con app or the Daily Dragon fliers at the information booths for the most up-to-date information.


The Schedule

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5:30p: Group Meetup!
Marriott Marquis, Marquis Level, M103-M105
The Theater Nerds are coming! Learn how you can support the idea of a Theater Track at Dragon Con, meet new friends, play theater adjacent games, win prizes, get your badge ribbon, and a raffle ticket!

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10:00a: The Magic of Disney on Broadway
Virtual Panel – YouTube
Our panel of Disney enthusiasts present a joy-filled exploration of the spellbinding fusion of Disney’s beloved characters and the electrifying energy of Broadway. We discuss how the music, choreography, and stagecraft transport you to Agrabah, the African savannah, and beyond, where we can bask in the pure joy of the extraordinary journeys where dreams come true. Don’t miss the chance to be whisked away on a magical adventure where Disney and Broadway collide in an explosion of wonder!

10:00a: Revolting Children: Matilda’s Musical Magic on Stage & Screen
Marriott Marquis, Atrium Level, A707
Step into a world of enchantment as our panel takes you on a rollicking adventure through the transformation of Matilda from page to stage, and back to the silver screen!. Expect laughter, mischief, and a dash of music in this captivating discussion you won’t want to miss!
Host Track: Young Adult Literature

11:30a: The Beat Goes On: The Rise of TV Musicals
Marriott Marquis, Marquis Level, M302-M303
Uncover the enchanting world of musical TV shows like Zoey, Glee, Galavant, Schmigadoon, and more. How do they revolutionize music and storytelling on TV? Even normal genre shows get into the act! Let’s explore their impact and the genre’s future in our discussion!
Host Track: American Sci-Fi & Fantasy Media

4:00p: Theater & Nerddom: Is Theater Pop Culture?
Marriott Marquis, Marquis Level, M103-M105
Let’s ignite the ultimate debate: Is Theater a bona fide member of Pop Culture? Join our panel of nerds as we unravel the threads of the stage and geekdom. Get ready for a geek-tastic exploration of whether the Bard can meet superheroes, and the footlights can shine as bright as lightsabers!
Host Track: American Sci-Fi Classics

7:00p: Sing-Along – Heading Back to Washington Heights: In the Heights
Courtland Grand, Macon Room
Step into the lively streets and vibrant culture of the neighborhood as we come together to sing, dance, and rediscover the heartwarming and unforgettable melodies that have made this musical a cherished favorite.
Host Track: Alternate & Historical Fiction

8:30p: Science Fiction in the World of Theater
Hyatt, Embassy AB
Science Fiction & Theater, two things as different as they get, right? Wrong! Rocky Horror, Metropolis, and Return to the Forbidden Planet are just a few examples of when scifi and theater merge. We talk about the shows we love, the ones we want to do, and why you should give them a chance.
Host Track: Science Fiction Literature

11:30p: 50 Years of Rocky Horror (The Show! Damnit Janet!)
Marriott Marquis, Marquis Level, M103-M105
Once upon a time, Richard O’Brien had a brainwave: blend B-horror humor, schlocky dialogue, muscle flicks, and 50s rock ‘n’ roll into a musical. Enter Rocky Horror Show! Grab heels, corset, fishnets and channel your inner Transylvanian, while we celebrate 50 years of cult classic show!
Host Track: American Sci-Fi Classics

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10:00a: Shakespearean Comedy: Love, Mistaken Identities, & Social Satire
Virtual Panel – YouTube
Indulge in an enchanting journey into the world of Shakespearean comedy. Join us as we unravel the delightful tapestry of love, mistaken identities, and social satire found in Shakespeare’s comedic masterpieces. From the uproarious antics of mischievous characters to the witty wordplay that fills the air, we’ll explore the timeless shows that have delighted audiences for centuries. Whether you’re a lover of Shakespeare or new to his comedies, this panel promises an engaging exploration of his unparalleled ability to make us laugh and reflect on the follies of human nature. Come and immerse yourself in the mirth and merriment of Shakespearean comedy!

1:00p: When Fandom Meets Footlights: A Theatrical Journey into Geek Culture
Hyatt, Hanover FG
Geeky productions have taken the stage by storm! Beetlejuice, Back to the Future, and Heathers are just a few examples of the biggest named fan fueled shows! And there’s plenty more that operate off-off-Broadway! Lets talk about about the magic, mischief, and musicality of genre-specific theater!
Host Track: Filk Singing

2:30p: The Road To Hadestown: Mythology in a Post-Apocalyptic World
Westin, Chastain FG
Welcome to Hadestown, an award-winning musical that intertwines mythology and a post-apocalyptic world. Two young dreamers live in a world of famine and death. and this story tells of their hell-raising journey to the underworld and back and their struggle to live in a world that is at its end.
Host Track: Apocalypse Rising

2:30p: Thespians of the Final Frontier
Hilton, Galleria 2-3
Some would believe that any crossovers with Star Trek & theater would be highly illogical. Au contraire! From Shakespeare to fandom theater, Klingon Opera & cat poetry, Trekkies and Thespians overlap more than you might think. Resistance is futile, make sure you are there for a panel like no other!
Host Track: Trek Track

5:30p: Sing-Along – 35th Anniversary of Phantom of the Opera
Hilton, Grand Ballroom East
It’s been 35 years since we first heard the music of the night, but the Phantom is a beloved show and a permanent part of the theater world. We’ve been wishing we could hear your voice again so we’ve put together a selection of our favorite songs to sing together before the Phantom takes flight.
Host Track: Alternate & Historical Fiction

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10:00a: Stagecraft Secrets: The Art of Writing for the Theater
Virtual Panel – YouTube
In this captivating panel, dive into the world of playwrights and their craft as we explore the intricate interplay of words, emotions, and imagination that bring stories to life on stage. Whether you’re an aspiring dramatist or a theater enthusiast, this panel offers a unique glimpse into the magic that transforms words into unforgettable theatrical experiences.

10:00a: History & Theater: American History told from the Stage
Courtland Grand, Macon Room
Broadway has never shied away from exploring history. Just look at Hamilton, 1776, Hair, Newsies, Allegiance, Parade, and Ragtime to name a few. We’ll discuss how theater lets modern audiences process historical events and how it addresses, skews, and sometimes, even changes historical perspectives.
Host Track: Alternate & Historical Fiction

3:00p: Photoshoot – Broadway, Musicals, Theater & Performance
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RSVP is recommended at the Facebook Event Link.

5:30p: Cross-Casting: Breaking the Walls of Gender & Race in Theater
Hyatt, Hanover AB
From Hamilton, 1776, to Six and beyond, gender and racial blind casting become more and more normal in todays theater world. Lets talk about this trend & how it helps make the theater world more dynamic and inclusive.
Host Track: Diversity in Speculative Fiction & Literature Fandom

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10:00a: Willkommen to the Kit Kat Club: Celebrating the Legacy of Cabaret
Virtual Panel – YouTube
Step into the enchanting world of Cabaret as we celebrate the theatrical brilliance of John Kander’s iconic musical and its transition to the silver screen in the 1972 movie adaptation. Join us for a captivating discussion that delves into the history, cultural impact, and enduring allure of this unforgettable production. From its electrifying beginnings on stage to its transformation into a cinematic masterpiece, we’ll explore the essence of Cabaret and its profound influence on the world of performing arts.

11:30a: Behind the Mask: The History, Myths and Legends of the Phantom of the Opera
Courtland Grand, Macon Room
The longest-running show in Broadway history, and a global sensation, the story of The Phantom of the Opera was built on actual history. Our Phantom enthusiasts will discuss the real events, the legends, and stories from the show that have inspired pop culture for half a century.
Host Track: Alternate & Historical Fiction

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Dragon Con 2023

Dragon Con 2023
Atlanta, GA – August 31 through September 4, 2023

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Dragon Con!

It’s typically an annual tradition for me, but it won’t be this year. I’m taking this year off for personal and family reasons, but I’d still like to support the convention where possible.

The convention app is available now – look for Dragon Con by Core-apps in the Apple App Store and the Google Play Store – and will have the schedule of events soon. The list of confirmed guests, performers, artists, and attending professionals is available on the official Dragon Con site. That list and the events surrounding it will obviously be subject to the ongoing WGA/SAG-AFTRA strike.

Dragon Con itself takes place in downtown Atlanta spanning five hotels (Sheraton Atlanta Courtland Grand, Hilton Atlanta, Atlanta Marriott Marquis, Hyatt Regency Atlanta, and Westin Peachtree Plaza) and the AmericasMart Atlanta exhibition center. The convention draws approximately 70,000 to 80,000 attendees (or more) annually and showcases one of the city’s most popular parades on Saturday morning at 10am. This year, the attendance numbers will be lower with an attendance cap between the reported 85,000 in 2019 and 65,000 in 2022.

Dragon Con prides itself on contributions to charity and the community. You can find more information about those efforts on their webpage. Each year, the convention partners with a local charity organization and this year’s partner is CURE Childhood Cancer. CURE’s mission is to conquer childhood cancer through funding targeted research while supporting patients and their families. Donations can be made at various locations around the convention, including donation buckets in each track room and contributions from the annual charity auctions. Dragon Con will match every donation up to $125,000.

The convention has previously hosted the Dragon Con Hustle, a virtual 5K conducted on the honor system. The registration fee is donated to the annual charity and each participant gets a physical medal two weeks after the convention ends. As of this writing, I haven’t seen a post about the event this year, but keep an eye out if you’re interested. You can run, walk, roll, or even skip your way to the goal, and all Dragon Con asks is for a progress update on social media with the #DragonConHustle hashtag.

Dragon Con also hosts one of the most successful blood drives with the donations going to the non-profit Lifesouth Community Blood Centers. Lifesouth serves 125 hospitals in Alabama, Georgia, and Florida, and the Dragon Con blood drives routinely outperform those held at that big West Coast corporate convention. In exchange for your donation, you get a custom exclusive t-shirt.

If you’re new to the convention, consider visiting the Dragon Con Newbies group on Facebook. It is run by Kevin Bachelder, Sue Kisenwether, Kim McGibony, and me, and is an in-depth community resource for information about this massive (and sometimes overwhelming) event. Memberships (tickets) for this year’s convention are available, however memberships are limited.

Note: All Dragon Con schedules are tentative until the convention ends on Monday. Even then, things are a bit suspect.

I will miss you all this year. Please be safe and have a wonderful long weekend, and (fate willing) I’ll see you all again in 2024.

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Culture on My Mind – SUBSAFE

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Culture on My Mind
SUBSAFE
July 24, 2023

On June 18, 2023, the submersible Titan imploded during an excursion to the wreck of the Titanic in the Atlantic Ocean. The submersible was owned and operated by OceanGate CEO Stockton Rush, and the incident claimed the lives of Rush, French deep-sea explorer and Titanic expert Paul-Henri Nargeolet, British billionaire Hamish Harding, Pakistani-British billionaire Shahzada Dawood, and Dawood’s son Suleman.

I watched as the internet exploded in memes and mockery over this event. I get the reasoning behind it: According to the 2022 Global Wealth Report from Credit Suisse, nearly half of the world’s wealth – 47.8%, or 221.7 trillion in US dollars – is controlled by 1.2% of the world’s population. Over half of the world’s population has a wealth of less than $10,000, and one-third of the population lives in the $10,000-$100,000 range. 

This year, Forbes reported that there are 2,640 billionaires on the planet. They are collectively worth $12.2 trillion. That’s 2.6% of the world’s wealth controlled by a tiny fraction of the world’s population, and they are concentrated in the United States, China, India, and Germany.

I’m not here today to adjudicate that. It’s merely the motive behind the reaction of the masses as one billionaire’s hubris killed four other people. And while it’s possible that those four passengers may have known about the submersible’s shortcomings, it’s not likely in my opinion.

I look at skydiving, scuba diving, bungee jumping, rollercoasters, and other such thrill-seeking experiences that people enjoy. Most of them are taken with the assumption that some higher authority has oversight… that the attraction has a safety record and someone would have shut them down if it wasn’t safe to an acceptable degree of risk.

OceanGate has been transporting paying customers on submersible trips since 2010, including several trips to other shipwrecks. On its face, 13 years without significant incidents is a pretty good track record. Most people in search of a thrill-seeking experience would stop looking for problems at that point and sign the requisite waivers.

I don’t engage in the internet’s mockery of the Titan implosion because I can reasonably assume that those four passengers made the same risk calculations. But what came out after the Titan implosion is what really bothered me as a former submariner. 

In a 2019 Smithsonian Magazine article, Rush was referred to as a “daredevil inventor” who believed that the U.S. Passenger Vessel Safety Act of 1993 “needlessly prioritized passenger safety over commercial innovation”. He later admitted that he broke rules with “logic and good engineering” behind those decisions. He described safety as a “pure waste” and suggested that people should do nothing in life if they want to remain safe.

The OceanGate submersible had multiple engineering issues which Rush ignored based on faulty assumptions and questionable engineering experience. Rush also ignored dissenting opinions from David Lochridge and Rob McCallum, even to the point of firing dissenters and pursuing legal action against them.

But, most importantly to what I want to discuss here, he openly stated in a now deleted video meeting with Teledyne Marine that he bucked the trend of hiring submarine veterans – “50-year-old white guys” – because he wanted his team to be younger and more inspirational.

The thing is that the talent that he kicked aside because he wanted to “make expeditions to the Titanic more enjoyable for his customers” could have potentially saved those customers on June 18, 2023. Submarine veterans (like me) know about the history of the USS Thresher and the quality assurance program that was developed as a result.

On April 10, 1963, the USS Thresher (SSN-593) was lost at sea with all hands. She was a Permit-class nuclear submarine, the fastest and quietest of the day, and designed to hunt and kill Soviet submarines during the Cold War. Thresher was launched in 1960 and conducted her sea trials over the next couple of years to thoroughly evaluate her new and complex technological systems. After a series of operations, she entered Portsmouth Shipyard in July 1962 for a post-shakedown availability to examine and repair systems, and as typical for first-of-class boats, the availability took longer than expected. Thresher was finally certified for sea and undocked on April 8, 1963.

The crew began post-overhaul sea trials the next day, and everything seemed to be okay until the deep-dive tests on April 10th. Thresher slowly dove deeper while making circles under her surface support ship, Skylark, pausing every 100 feet of depth to perform a shipwide integrity check. As the submarine neared test depth, Skylark received a garbled communication indicating “…minor difficulties, have positive up angle, attempting to blow”.

That “blow” would be an emergency blow of the main ballast tanks, which means rapidly filling the large tanks with high-pressure air and making the ship overwhelmingly positively buoyant. You’ve probably seen the stock footage in movies and television, particularly during The Hunt for Red October.

There was one more even more garbled message from the deep and Skylark‘s crew knew that something was wrong. An extensive search was conducted and Thresher‘s families were notified that night. Chief of Naval Operations Admiral George W. Anderson Jr. held a press conference to announce that the submarine was lost with all hands.

After an investigation, the root cause of the disaster was determined to be a failure of the saltwater piping system. Specifically, there was a joint that relied on silver brazing instead of welding, and that failure would have potentially shorted out an electrical panel, shut down the reactor, and caused a loss of propulsion. There was also some concern over excessive moisture in the high-pressure air system which would have frozen during an emergency blow and plugged up the piping. The Navy made several modifications to systems to prevent these failures in the future. 

They also instituted the Submarine Safety Program, better known as SUBSAFE, which is a quality assurance program specifically designed to provide maximum reasonable assurance that submarine hulls will remain watertight and can recover from unanticipated flooding. The program’s scope includes every system exposed to sea pressure or critical to recovery during a flood. Any work on those systems is tightly controlled to ensure that materials, assembly, maintenance, and testing are perfect, including certifications with traceable quality evidence from point of manufacture to point of installation.

The track record speaks for itself: From 1915 to 1963, the United States Navy lost 16 submarines through non-combat-related causes. After SUBSAFE was introduced in 1963, the only submarine lost in similar causes was the USS Scorpion (SSN-589), and she was not SUBSAFE certified.

It’s an expensive program, but the cost of failure is much higher, and it’s a program that could have prevented the Titan disaster had some “50-year-old white guys” been consulted. SUBSAFE is embedded in the DNA of pretty much anyone who has earned a set of submarine dolphins. The regulations are written in blood.

The story of Stockton Rush and the Titan should serve as a cautionary tale. Safety and engineering may not be sexy and edgy, but it is a necessary part of pushing the limits of knowledge and understanding. The ocean’s depths are perhaps the largest unexplored frontier on Earth, and while I personally think that we should leave the Titanic graveyard alone, we should definitely continue to research the sea. 

But we should never willingly throw away experience and wisdom in the process, otherwise, we invite hubris, ignorance, and ultimately disaster.


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Culture on My Mind is inspired by the weekly Can’t Let It Go segment on the NPR Politics Podcast where each host brings one thing to the table that they just can’t stop thinking about.

For more creativity with a critical eye, visit Creative Criticality.

Schedule Update: The Timestamps Project (WGA/SAG-AFTRA Strike Edition)

Schedule Update: The Timestamps Project
WGA/SAG-AFTRA Strike Edition

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The Timestamps Project is on hiatus in solidarity with the Writers Guild of America.

I recognize that Doctor Who is guided primarily by Equity UK, formerly known as the British Actors’ Equity Association, but the show also holds a production number with the Screen Actors Guild because they pay pension and healthcare contributions for any SAG members of the cast. Technically, Doctor Who is a SAG signatory. But that’s not important to this discussion.

I stand with the WGA and SAG-AFTRA because I am a writer and creative. I come from a family of creatives. Many members of my close-knit geek family are creatives, some of whom make their livings in film and television because of their passion for telling stories that mean something to all of us. Creativity lives in us, and it deserves to thrive with us.

I’m not being asked to do this. In fact, the strike rules don’t apply to me because I’m not a member of the unions and Creative Criticality falls more under the journalism rules than anything else. I am choosing this action because I feel that strongly about it.

The WGA strike started on May 2, 2023, and is based on the evolution of the streaming environment. The WGA has minimums for writers, but unlike the normal American worker who is nominally employed on a permanent basis, a writer works 35-40 weeks a year on a standard network show and 20-24 weeks a year in the streaming environment (where seasons are far shorter). In a city like Los Angeles, writers are fighting with the incredibly high cost of living and inflation. To compete against that, writers need a raise of about 10 percent.

Along with increased minimum compensation across all media, writers are also looking for increased residuals (which have been notoriously tough with streamers), appropriate compensations for writing television series across all stages of production, larger contributions to pension and health plans, the strengthening of professional standards and the overall protections for writers, and other terms.

Writers have talked about toxic environments in production, and it’s pretty obvious from the plans by studio execs to wait out the strike until writers “go broke“. These studio execs are on display as embodiments of late-stage capitalism: Success being defined by how much wealth can be banked while paying those who create the actual products as little as possible. They’d rather see crews destitute on the street rather than pay more in fair compensation and cut into their million- and billion-dollar comforts. It’s despicable, and it’s part of a pattern in corporate America of continually undervaluing the creative class.

It’s also pretty obvious on the SAG-AFTRA front. Consider the proposal that background actors – the lowest paid in the industry – get scanned for a single day’s pay with the intent of using their likenesses for any project at any time in perpetuity. It’s actually funny when you look at the Hollywood anti-piracy efforts over the last couple of decades that focused on how wrong it was to pay for something, transform it from the original format, and then share it over and over without due compensation.

As a producer friend of mine told me, this action would eliminate most working actors, the ones who never “make it” but still pay the bills just fine. It would domino across the industry: Current rules dictate one assistant director per every 100 background actors, so as background actor jobs diminish, jobs for ADs are eliminated. That cascades by eliminating jobs among all of the guilds.

All of it so that studio executives can pocket more cash as the industry burns around them.

During my lifetime, I have watched time and again as creatives have been treated like garbage. They’re treated like they don’t have real jobs or that their work is in the public domain because it exists in the internet era. Creatives aren’t valued until they don’t produce, and then they are replaced as if they were ultimately disposable.

Creatives are the lifeblood of the entertainment industry and the history of human storytelling, from film and television to books, video games, comics, art, podcasts, and beyond. Without creatives, we have nothing for actors, directors, producers, and publishers to translate to their chosen media. In turn, the studio executives have nothing without the hard work of all those people.

I stand with creatives. I stand against the continued devaluing of creatives and hard-working individuals. It’s not because I’m some sort of influencer (though, wouldn’t it be nice to have that many eyes on my work?), but because it’s the right thing to do when creators more powerful than me are fighting for what they believe in.

The Timestamps Project will remain on hiatus until the strike has ended. I hope you understand.

WGA-SAG-AFTRA-2023

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The Timestamps Project is an adventure through the televised universe of Doctor Who, story by story, from the beginning of the franchise. For more reviews like this one, please visit the project’s page at Creative Criticality.

Timestamp #285: Rosa

A powerful historical story.

Montgomery, Alabama – 1943: A seamstress named Rosa Parks boards a bus on her way home from work. She pays the fee and heads to the back where “colored people” are forced to sit. The driver tells her that she must disembark and enter the bus through the back door. When she tries to reason with the driver, he forcibly removes her. In the process, she drops her purse and briefly sits in the “whites” section to retrieve it. The driver is furious, prompting Rosa to tell him not to hit her. She leaves the bus and heads for the back door, but the driver maliciously drives away, leaving Rosa stranded in the middle of the street.

Montgomery, Alabama – 1955: The Doctor and her companions land in an alleyway. She’s dismayed that they didn’t land in Sheffield, and she chastizes the TARDIS for failing to take the humans home for the ninth time. Graham remarks that it was the fourteenth attempt, but he’s interested in meeting Elvis Presley. The Doctor discovers high amounts of artron energy in the area, which might be why the TARDIS chose this time and place, so they decide to investigate.

As they walk, Ryan notices that a woman has dropped her glove. When he tries to return it, the woman’s husband rewards him with a slap to the face. As the TARDIS team tries to work through the assault, Rosa Parks steps in to smooth things over. When the white couple walks away, Rosa turns on the team and lectures them on the Emmett Till situation before introducing herself. The team is starstruck, and the Doctor finds traces of artron energy all around Rosa.

Meanwhile, a mysterious man in a leather jacket finds the TARDIS. He tries to break in with an energy weapon but the capsule’s shields deflect it.

The Doctor and her companions convene at Slim’s Bar. Ryan and Yaz discuss their lessons about Rosa Parks from school, awed by the fact that she refused to give up her seat on a bus on December 1, 1955. The event (and her subsequent arrest) led to the Montgomery Bus Boycott and the end of racial segregation on public buses in America. That event will happen tomorrow.

Graham notes how quiet the bar has become. A waitress confronts them, stating that they don’t serve “negroes” or Mexicans (in reference to Yaz), and forces them to leave. Ryan is disgusted that he has traveled to the one time and place where he is hated most. The team decides to track down the artron energy and follows the readings to a nearby warehouse with copious padlocks.

Elsewhere, the mysterious man creeps on Rosa Parks. He returns to the warehouse where the team has discovered a suitcase hidden by a perception filter. The suitcase is filled with worn futuristic tech, including a charger. The mystery man fires on them, pushing the team into the yard outside. The Doctor confronts him, recognizing his weapon as a temporal displacement device that sends things to other times. She also notes that he’s carrying a vortex manipulator. He threatens to kill the team. She tells him not to threaten her. She takes a scan of his tech before the team leaves.

Their next stop is whites-only Sahara Springs Motel. The Doctor and Graham secure a room and sneak Ryan and Yaz in through a back window. They brainstorm about their situation and use a wall as a markerboard until a police officer knocks at the door. The Doctor erases the writing with her sonic screwdriver before answering the door, admitting the officer who searches the room. Luckily, Yaz and Ryan have escaped through the bathroom window and hidden behind a nearby dumpster. The officer departs with a warning that the Doctor and Graham should leave town soon.

Yaz and Ryan discuss their situation, irritated that things haven’t truly evolved between 1955 and their home time. Ryan relates how he is stopped while driving more often than his white friends, and Yaz explains how she’s seen as a “Paki” and a terrorist for going to a mosque. They return to the room and continue to work.

The team collects bus schedules and (thanks to Grace) narrows down their target to a bus driven by James Blake. They take a ride on the bus, disgusted by the seating situation, and end up at Rosa’s workplace. They eventually find Rosa on the bus and ask her about her riding habits, but she prompts the Doctor to move to maintain the racial status quo. Ryan volunteers to follow Rosa home while the rest of the team makes plans.

Rosa confronts Ryan for following her, but Ryan offers to help her with the fight. She eventually invites him to join her Youth Council, consisting of her husband, Fred Gray, and Martin Luther King. Ryan explains that his grandmother loved King and makes coffee for the meeting. He talks with Rosa later and shares his hopes that things will get better in the future.

The Doctor confronts the mysterious time traveler, tricking him into sending his own equipment to the 79th century. She identifies him as a prisoner of Stormcage, the same location where River Song was imprisoned. His name is Krasko, and he was imprisoned for murdering 2000 people, but he can’t kill the Doctor or Rosa due to a neural restrictor. The Doctor tests this by destroying his vortex manipulator and stranding him in time. Krasko wants to change history starting with the point where everything started to go wrong, and the Doctor warns him to go somewhere else. Krasko refuses.

Meanwhile, Yaz and Graham continue their research. Graham returns to Slim’s Bar and finds James Blake, but Graham is surprised to hear that Blake is taking a day off (orchestrated by Krasko). Graham returns to the motel room where the team is surprised by the news, prompting them to get James Blake back on duty.

Yaz and the Doctor pose as raffle officials, congratulating Elias Griffin Jr. on winning an all-expenses paid trip to Las Vegas to meet Frank Sinatra. The catch is that he has to leave now so he’ll have to miss his shift. Graham and Ryan find James Blake fishing on Mill Creek and convince him that a group of Black passengers are planning a sit-in protest across all of the bus routes. Furious, Blake packs up his gear and goes back to work.

Finally, the Doctor deliberately tears her coat and contracts Rosa to fix it as soon as possible. Yaz offers to wait for it.

Blake finds that his bus has been wrecked. A disguised Krasko tells him to head home, so the Doctor sends Ryan to game the bus system while Graham finds a replacement bus for Blake to drive. As Blake starts his route, Yaz talks to Rosa about their lives. Rosa is surprised that Yaz is a police officer. Rosa finishes the coat in time to catch the bus.

Ryan discovers that Krasko has blocked the road. After a confrontation about Ryan’s “kind” staying “in their place”, Ryan sends Krasko back in time as far as the time traveler’s gadget will allow. He makes it back to the bus just in time, placing all of the key players in the right spots.

As events play out, Graham ends up being the fulcrum that forces Rosa to occupy a white seat. When Blake demands that she move, she refuses, even if means being arrested. Blake calls for the police, and as Rosa is taken away she nods to the travelers. It’s obvious that she won’t forget them.

The team returns to the TARDIS and the Doctor explains how history plays out. The boycotts occur, and segregation on buses ends on December 21, 1956. Life was still hard, but Rosa was recognized for her brave fight in June 1999 by President Bill Clinton when she received the Congressional Gold Medal.

She was also remembered well into the future. The Doctor opens the TARDIS doors to reveal Asteroid 284996. It is named Rosaparks.


This was a hard episode to watch. It is also a necessary one in the mission of science fiction.

As someone who has lived in Georgia for over a decade and has spent most of his professional life in the American South, I have studied a lot about the history of the places I’ve called home. Cases like the murder of Emmett Till – a 14-year-old boy who was abducted, tortured, and lynched on the mere accusation of offending a white woman – are heartbreaking and woven throughout the fabric of society.

The details are sometimes lost to time as the system whitewashes them (leading to the importance of educational places like the National Center for Civil and Human Rights and the Martin Luther King, Jr. National Historical Park, both in Atlanta, Georgia) and sometimes they are celebrated by those who support oppression (after an all-white jury found the perpetrators not guilty of Till’s murder and thus immune to double jeopardy, they sold the story of how they tortured and murdered Till to a popular magazine for the world to see).

In the nearly 250-year-long history of the United States, racial segregation has only been illegal for about 60 years. Even though it was banned by the Civil Rights Act of 1964, segregation remained for many years as jurisdictions dragged their feet toward compliance and enforcement.

Even with that considered, racism and discrimination aren’t dead, leading to the importance of this particular episode in the science fiction genre. One of my favorite quotes about the genre comes from Stargate SG-1‘s episode “200”, in which a character addresses the camera and states:

Science fiction is an existential metaphor that allows us to tell stories about the human condition. Isaac Asimov once said, “Individual science fiction stories may seem as trivial as ever to the blinded critics and philosophers of today, but the core of science fiction, its essence, has become crucial to our salvation, if we are to be saved at all.”

Science fiction is a mirror to reflect upon ourselves. The messages are timeless, but in the moment it has the power to show a receptive audience where their society stands. As such, it has the power to enlighten and offend, and the response says a lot about the viewer and how the message resonates.

The hope is that the audience takes the opportunity for self-reflection and self-improvement.

The writing takes some creative liberties, but the message delivered by this story, sadly, is still relevant today.

It also breaks some important ground in the history of Doctor Who since it was co-written by Malorie Blackman, the first woman of color to write for the series. She joins Vinay Patel, who penned the upcoming Demons of the Punjab, as the first writers of color to work on Doctor Who. They follow in Noel Clarke’s footsteps after he wrote Combat for Torchwood.

Further, the episode was directed by Mark Tonderai, the first Black director for Doctor Who. We previously saw his work on The Ghost Monument, and he follows in the footsteps of Waris Hussein, the first person of color to direct for the series. Hussein, of course, directed An Unearthly Child and the majority of Marco Polo.

The episode joins an elite pair by not featuring the series theme over the end credits. Here, the episode ends with “Rise Up” by Andra Day. It joins the finale of Earthshock, though that story ended with silence.

The racial tensions mirror concerns shared by Martha and Bill, though the tensions are brought fully into the spotlight here by the necessity of the story. I will say that the character of Krasko was written with a heavy hand, and his demise continues a (perhaps inadvertent) bloodthirsty trend of dispatching villains in this run.

I liked seeing a nod to The Chase as our heroes watch historical events on the Time-Space Visualizer (or something similar). Krasko’s meddling is reminiscent of the Meddling Monk‘s schemes, and I also found Graham’s constant use of the name “Doc” amusing. Apparently, the Thirteenth Doctor doesn’t share the First, Sixth, and Tenth Doctor’s dislike of the nickname.

Finally, we once again see the Doctor and companions becoming part of history – Donna and the Tenth Doctor were part of the events at Pompeii – and it makes me wonder if they were always there, thus creating another bootstrap paradox.

Rating: 5/5 – “Fantastic!”


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Timestamp #284: The Ghost Monument

A new family looking for an old friend.

Floating in the vacuum of deep space, the terror sets in as Ryan loses consciousness. A spacecraft arrives and the next thing that he knows is waking up in a pod with Graham watching over him. The spacecraft is being piloted by a woman named Angstrom who is suspicious of the two men. Despite the mutual misgivings, Angstrom drives the ship toward the “final” planet, which wasn’t where it was supposed to be.

Yaz and the Doctor are on a different ship, this one piloted by a man named Epzo. The “final” planet is named Desolation, and Epzo’s ship – which is falling apart around the trio – is crashing toward it. The Doctor recommends ejecting the back half of the ship, and while Epzo doesn’t like the idea, he has no choice.

Ryan, Graham, and Angstrom land on Desolation. The pilot scans the area while the two men revel in the fact that they’re on an alien planet. That joy soon evaporates as Epzo’s ship burns into the atmosphere above them and crashes pretty much on top of them.

The bright spot on the planet with three suns: The fam is back together.

The group makes their way across the desert as the pilots talk about their statuses as the last participants. An alarm echoing across the sands draws them to a large tent. Inside that tent, they find a man named Ilin and the lavish ephemera related to the final Rally of the Twelve Galaxies. The Doctor immediately recognizes all of it as a holographic projection.

The pilots have to survive the dangers of the planet without sabotage, injuries, or murder as they find a site called the Ghost Monument. The winner will receive 3.2 trillion Krin – is that a lot? – and will be taken off-planet, but the loser will be left to rot in desolation. Angstrom and Epzo are the last two participants in a field of 4000 who signed up for the ultimate test of survival and stamina.

The pilots are sent on their way, and the Doctor is treated to a holographic view of the Ghost Monument, which was named by the planet’s ancient settlers because it appears in the same place every 1000 rotations.

The Ghost Monument is the TARDIS. Its engines are stuck in a loop, leaving it to phase in and out on the planet. The Doctor and her crew set out after the pilots to get her ship back. They catch up to Angstrom and Epzo as the pilots fight over a single boat to cross a lake. Epzo threatens Angstom with a gun and the Doctor disarms him with Venusian Aikido. Ryan and Graham take a look at the broken engine while the Doctor and Yaz discover that the water is infested with flesh-eating microbes.

Graham tries to talk to Ryan about Grace, but Ryan shows him the cold shoulder. They do have a breakthrough about the engine, which is actually a solar battery. Meanwhile, Yaz and Angstrom bond for a short time until the boat is fixed.

The Doctor is puzzled by the empty planet, and Epzo shares a story about how his mother taught him a lesson about trust when she failed to catch him as he fell from a tree. Later, Angstrom explains the rally and how she entered to return home and bring her family back together again. Eventually, the travelers get some sleep while the Doctor watches over them.

When the boat lands, the group makes their way to some nearby ruins. Epzo and Angstrom split up while the Doctor and her companions enter the ruins. Epzo trips a sensor and activates a batch of sniper robots, and when he shoots at one, it shoots back. Both are struck, but the entire murderous group is activated. The Doctor’s group takes refuge in a shooting range, but when Ryan opts to fight back, the Doctor chastises him. Ryan goes all Call of Duty but returns when he can’t reload, bringing the snipers with him. The Doctor uses a fallen robot to rig an EMP, but this only gives them a short window to escape.

The Doctor’s group finds Angstrom and Epzo. After hacking into Angstrom’s tracker, the Doctor finds a hatch leading to an underground tunnel. They all take refuge in a large laboratory, taking heed of Ilin’s warning to not travel at night. Of course, Epzo wanders off to take a nap while everyone else explores the lab.

After syncing Angstrom’s tracker to the facility’s computer, they find a map of the tunnel system and a direct route to the Ghost Monument. Yaz and Ryan realize that the robots have found the hatch while the Doctor finds writing from the scientists who ran the facility. They were forced to work on weapons of mass destruction, and they opted to destroy the planet rather than let the weaponry fall into the hands of the Stenza. Angstrom reveals that the Stenza destroyed her planet and murdered millions, forcing her family into hiding.

Meanwhile, remnants of the scientists’ experiments attack Enzo, presenting as semi-sentient cloth strips. The group runs into the tunnels as the sniperbots shut down the life support systems. The group has no choice but to leave the tunnels, emerging into a field of acetylene. The Doctor takes a moment to praise Ryan for his courage as he climbs the ladder, and Ryan remembers that acetylene is lighter than air. The group digs into the sands as the cloth creatures whisper to them, even piquing the Doctor’s interest with something known as the Timeless Child. The Doctor and Graham use one of Enzo’s auto-igniting cigars to set the fields ablaze, destroying the cloth creatures.

As the suns rise, the group arrives at the tent marking the finish line. As Epzo and Angstrom debate who should win, the Doctor suggests that they enter the tent at the same time. Ilin is displeased but concedes the victory. He refuses, however, to take the Doctor and her fam off-world.

The Doctor is despondent and apologizes for failing to save her companions. The companions buoy her up as the sounds of the TARDIS echo around them. The Doctor uses her sonic screwdriver to summon and stabilize the TARDIS, and she is overjoyed when the time capsule materializes.

The ship has had a minor makeover on the outside, and it even opens the door for her. The inside has also been redecorated, and while it is a much darker control room, it does reflect the Doctor’s trip thus far with an orange crystal motif. The companions are astounded to see that the police box is bigger on the inside, and the Doctor is pleased to see that the console dispenses custard creams.

The Doctor works the controls and the TARDIS vanishes from Desolation.


The TARDIS has redecorated… and it’s okay. I’m not a fan of the dark and limited console room, but the designs on the walls and the eccentric console intrigue me. The crystal motif doesn’t pique my interest one way or the other, but it only makes sense when tying back into the Doctor’s homemade sonic screwdriver. The exterior is a nice callback to the Tom Baker era with the “pull to open” sign flipping the colors to white text on black.

The one choice that I really like is making the main entrance reflect the exterior design of the police box. It’s almost as if the Doctor and the companions have to step through the box to enter the extra-dimensional space.

I also like how Chris Chibnall paid attention to translation, specifically how the TARDIS’s translation field wouldn’t play into this story since the ship was missing. Enter the universal translators implanted by the medical pods as a nice touch.

I’m not a fan of the sonic screwdriver being used as a magic wand here. It’s a standard trope in the revival era, but there’s no reason why the team couldn’t spin the handwheel and open the hatch on their own. It was unnecessary to sonic it open.

I do like the new title sequence and the new theme. They take a creative spin on the usual while defining this era as its own.

The story itself is a standard quest line as our heroes get from point A to point B with some encounters along the way. That said, that bog-standard story is buoyed up by the characters as they get to know each other and the alien that they’re traveling with. The Doctor herself doesn’t present as some kind of superpowered deus ex machina, instead allowing the companions to solve the puzzles while encouraging them along the way. That helps to elevate an otherwise average adventure.

Rating: 4/5 – “Would you care for a jelly baby?”


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Timestamp #283: The Woman Who Fell to Earth

These new teeth are definitely weird.

Ryan Sinclair records a YouTube video and decides to talk about the greatest woman he ever met. He recounts trying to ride a bicycle with his grandmother Grace and her husband Graham O’Brien. It’s a challenge for him since Ryan struggles with dyspraxia, and when he falls off, he angrily throws the bike over a cliff. Grace and Graham try to console him but have to leave for their train home, so Ryan is left alone to retrieve the bike. He finds it trapped in a tree, then encounters a strange set of floating glowing golden lines. He touches one of them and watches as a purple plant-like pod emerges. It’s then that he calls the police.

We next meet Yasmin Khan, a probationary police officer who is settling a petty dispute between two women. She calls her supervisor, asking for something more challenging, and he gives her Ryan’s case. When Yaz meets with Ryan, she thinks that he’s pulling a prank on her, but their relationship warms up when they realize that they went to school together.

Grace and Graham are on their way home when a ball of energy collides with the train. The lights all go out, leaving the train shrouded in moonlight, and Grace investigates the disturbance. The couple soon encounters an erratic and electrified tentacle creature, and when they call Ryan and Yaz, the phones go dead. As the creature approaches, a woman falls through the train roof.

The Doctor springs into action and shorts out the electrified creature, but she cannot open the doors because she lost her sonic screwdriver. Yaz and Ryan arrive and the creature scans a bystander named Karl before briefly shocking everyone and flying away.

The Doctor takes charge but comes up short as Yaz asks who she is. The Doctor is perplexed by Yaz’s choice of address, recalling that she herself was a white-haired Scotsman half an hour before. She tells Ryan that she’s looking for a doctor before finding the train’s driver. Yaz thinks that the driver was murdered, but the Doctor says that she died of shock. The Doctor convinces Yaz and Ryan to join her, then meets Graham and Grace while mourning the loss of her TARDIS. Graham declares that there aren’t any aliens on trains in Sheffield, and the Doctor corrects him since she’s an alien.

Yaz takes contact information for a passenger named Karl and Ryan tells the Doctor about the pod. The team of Ryan, Yaz, Graham, and Grace go to the site but the pod is missing. In fact, it has been taken by a man named Andy for delivery to another man named Rahul. After paying Andy for his services, Rahul sets up several cameras to record the pod before sitting down to watch it.

The team, who the Doctor has started calling her “fam,” decides to check with their networks about anything out of the ordinary. Meanwhile, the Doctor collapses, prompting Ryan and Grace to take her to Ryan’s home. As the Doctor recovers, she glows with regeneration energy. Grace is astounded to find two separate pulses.

In Rahul’s shop, the pod cracks open. The energy awakens the electrical being and the Doctor simultaneously, and the Doctor discovers DNA bombs lodged in everyone’s collarbones. The Doctor tries to muddle through since her regeneration is not yet complete, but she recognizes the bombs as a way to get rid of witnesses. She reformats Ryan’s phone and uses it as a tracking device.

An armored figure emerges from the pod. Rahul demands to know where his sister is located and the being kills him and takes part of the corpse. The fam arrives soon after, watching as the creature leaves the shop. The creature escapes so the team investigates the shop. The creature has taken a single tooth from Rahul, and as Grace covers the body, Ryan finds the opened pod. The Doctor questions why the pod has come and Ryan admits to touching the golden lines.

The tracking signal, which was correlated to the electrical creature, has gone erratic. The Doctor decides to build her own sonic screwdriver so she can properly analyze the data. Meanwhile, Ryan and Yaz find a video file from Rahul, meant to be played upon his death. Rahul’s sister Asha was taken and he took it upon himself to find the truth.

The Doctor scans the pod with her fancy new sonic screwdriver and finds a recall circuit. She infers that the pod alien and the electrical alien are at war and looking to scrap it out on Earth. Graham gets a call about an alien’s location as the Doctor gathers some equipment. Meanwhile, the pod alien kills a drunk man who tosses salad at it and extracts another tooth. It then spots the electrical alien and heads toward it.

The Doctor’s team arrives first and shorts out the electrical alien. The Doctor scans it and finds a mass of gathering coils, a species that collects and correlates data. That data points back to Karl, the other passenger on the train. They are interrupted by the armored alien who demands to know who the Doctor is. When she can’t come up with the answer, she asks who the alien is.

The creature removes its helmet and identifies himself as Tzim-Sha (“Tim Shaw”) of the Stenza warrior race. He collects trophies from each kill and embeds them into his body, and he has been sent to hunt a randomly selected human without technology or assistance so he can become his people’s leader. Yaz and Ryan recognize that Asha was a previous victim of the hunt and that Ryan granted permission for the hunt by touching the golden lines. The Doctor declares that Tzim-Sha is cheating by using the gathering coils, and it turns out that he’s a double-cheat because he uses a short-range teleporter to escape after downloading the target’s info.

Tzim-Sha tracks Karl to his job as a crane operator at a building site. Following behind, the Doctor tasks Graham and Grace with evacuating the site while she, Yaz, and Ryan start climbing another crane. Despite his disability, Ryan takes on the task. Meanwhile, the Doctor formulates a plan to evacuate Karl by moving two cranes together. Karl tries to make the jump, but he’s stopped by Tzim-Sha, so the Doctor decides to jump across to confront the hunter herself.

She also takes a moment to curse her shorter legs.

Meanwhile, the Gathering Coil has recovered and is attacking the cranes. Grace decides to electrocute it with power from the site’s main power.

The Doctor confronts Tzim-Sha and threatens to destroy his recall device. She asks what he does with his trophies and is offended to learn that they are kept in stasis on the edge of death forever. Tzim-Sha threatens to detonate the DNA bombs, leaving the two at a standoff. Finally, the hunter asks his opponent who she is.

She’s glad he asked because she is the Doctor, sorting out fair play throughout the universe. She asks him to leave the planet and he decides to detonate the bombs, but she moved them to the Gathering Coil. The pain of the explosions transfers to Tzim-Sha and he’s stunned, leaving an opportunity for Karl to kick him off the crane. Tzim-Sha snags the recall device and uses it to teleport away as he falls.

Grace successfully runs the cables to the Gathering Coil, but when the electricity shorts out the creature, the energy discharge knocks her from the crane. She dies in Graham’s arms as the rest of the team arrives.

Ryan later pays tribute to Grace, the greatest woman he has ever known, on his YouTube channel. He continues trying to ride the bike in her honor as the Doctor watches from a distance. At Grace’s funeral, Ryan waits for his father but gives up after two hours. Later on, Graham gives a heartfelt speech about how he met Grace during his cancer treatments and how he has cherished their three years together.

After the funeral, the Doctor discusses her family and how she lost them a long time ago. She carries them with her as memories during her travels. She remembers that she needs to find her TARDIS and decides that she’s stayed too long. Yaz tells her that she really needs to change clothes.

Yaz, Ryan, and the Doctor go shopping at a charity store, eventually landing on a very colorful outfit. She then assembles a rudimentary teleportation device out of Tzim-Sha’s technology that will track the artron energy from the TARDIS. The device activates…

…and teleports all four of them into deep space.


This episode marks a major tonal shift in the franchise. It marks the debut of the first official female Doctor – I love Curse of Fatal Death but it really doesn’t count – and the introduction of the largest all-new regular cast since Terminus. On top of all of that, this story premiered with the biggest crew shift since The Eleventh Hour, marking a near-effective reboot of the show.

It’s not a reboot, mind you, but it certainly feels like it from direction and music to cinematography.

The companions are quite engaging as they learn about this whole new world, and I found the large cast to be used well in this story. I loved how authentic they were with each other, even to the point of Graham being upset about touching the “permission slip” symbol, Grace chastizing him for that, and the Doctor admitting that she would have done exactly what Ryan did.

The loss of Grace was tragic and I do wish that she would have remained to travel with the Doctor because the chemistry was great, but the cast is really too large for revival-era standard hour-long adventures. The last time that the Doctor traveled with three companions, the show thrived on stories broadcast over multiple hours per adventure. I don’t think there’s enough time in a single episode to give everyone their dues.

Of those companions, we’ve seen one of them before as a different character: Bradley Walsh played the Pied Piper in The Day of the Clown.

The Thirteenth Doctor is another tonal shift, taking us from the acerbic Twelfth Doctor back to a more whimsical Time Lord. She’s more soft-spoken, but there is tremendous power behind the cover. There’s also a lot of Doctor Who oddness, like using her (unreliable) nose to tell time.

There’s not a lot in the trivia department, but of note is that this is the tenth story not to feature the TARDIS. It joins Mission to the Unknown, Doctor Who and the Silurians, The Mind of Evil, The Dæmons, The Sea Devils, The Sontaran Experiment, Genesis of the Daleks, Midnight, and The Lie of the Land. It’s also the first time since The Faceless Ones that we have two male companions traveling with the Doctor.

I’m interested as to where the previous sonic screwdriver and the sonic sunglasses ended up, especially since humans are keen on reverse engineering alien technology. One hopes that UNIT was hovering around and snapped those pieces up for the Black Archive or something.

I enjoyed watching this again for the Timestamps Project. It’s probably the third or fourth time that I have seen this episode, and I find it to be a strong presentation (even as a regeneration episode). I saw it live with Mike Faber at a viewing party hosted by Battle & Brew. Every time I see it, I’m reminded of a bunch of fans crowded around a bunch of television sets and wondering what the future of Doctor Who had to offer.

I’m eager to see how this era has held up as I move through it once again.

Rating: 5/5 – “Fantastic!”


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